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07 April 2003 @ 02:02 pm
Nanofiction #1  
Nights Are Quieter After May

A lazy vampire curled in the husk of Xander's body, cicada-dead. Or just resting. Hard tufty head unmoved against Xander's shoulder as he watched. Commented:

"Sloppy work."

"Trim your cuticles next time."

Xander licked the brush gently down the nail, blackening it. Moonlight's favorite couch held their bodies like a boat. Wars didn't distract them.

flaming june: BreathPlay_flaming_june_ on April 7th, 2003 02:31 pm (UTC)
Oh! The economy! The grace! The black nail polish!

Very nice.
Jimmy Petstore: fuck warsnoopypez on April 7th, 2003 02:42 pm (UTC)
Good.. guh. I have never seen such writing. Just.. wow.

Amazing. ::is jealous:: ;)
kassrachel on April 7th, 2003 07:25 pm (UTC)
Curled. Husk. Cicada-dead. Tufty. Licked, as a verb for nail polish.

Wild thing, I think I love you. :-)
Agnesbientot on April 8th, 2003 03:18 am (UTC)
Very haiku. Without the syllable count or the Vogon associations. You continue to amaze.