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09 December 2005 @ 05:39 pm
extra comment fic: Uncommon  
As a thank-you for sending me "Hive," some scribbling for logovo: some unusual kink for either John or Rodney

"No, please--harder." Rodney's voice was husky, like it never got except when they were alone in bed and he didn't need to assert his authority over anyone or point out exactly why they were heartbreaking examples of declining educational standards or yelp his outrage at the slings and arrows of a universe that was out to get him.

John rested his chin on Rodney's hip to study him, then rubbed his stubbled cheek across the skin and got a little outcry in response, but Rodney's eyes didn't open. His face was flushed pink and his body exuded heat. The movements of his head against the pillow had smudged his hair askew.

"You sure?"

In what was probably an answer, Rodney dug the fingers of his left hand into the sheets as if to anchor himself and shifted. John could hear his breathing quicken and realized that just the thought of harder was jacking Rodney's urgency higher.

"You whine for bandages when you get a paper cut," John said. "Never thought you'd go for something like this."

Rodney shook his head from side to side on the pillow, tense like a cocked trigger, not patient or impatient, just suspended until John started again. John raked his jaw down Rodney's thigh and back up, wondering how long he could draw it out until Rodney broke and begged. He didn't draw it out--but he only started again because he wanted to, because he couldn't wait. He bit the base of Rodney's dick and Rodney cried out, convulsing on the bed as if John had just touched him with a live wire. A wave of heat broke inside John's head, pulse crashing like surf into his ears, scalp pulling tight. He bit up along the shaft, harder this time, taking Rodney at his word. Delicate skin turned red, marked by his teeth.

"Oh god, please," Rodney cried, "oh god, please--" His words bled together into a chant and the closer John got to the swollen head of his cock, the more desperate he sounded. When John sank his teeth there, Rodney sobbed and arched and came. The wetness hit John's tongue and slid back out, slicking Rodney's skin, and John sucked and got another hit, and then a few more, each dryer but jerking in his mouth with the same intensity. The contractions tapered off but he kept thrusting his tongue against the head with hard strokes until Rodney groaned and weakly batted him away.

John drew off and ground his hips against the bed a few times, shuddering and ready to stay in a holding pattern for a few more minutes, but the friction was so good that his hips sped up. He worked his dick frantically over the rucked sheets until he came, muscles clenching with pleasure, throat locking by instinct to cage any sounds that could betray him.

But he wasn't being tortured, he didn't have to hold in information.

"Oh fuck," he said, crawling up to collapse against Rodney, whose arms wrapped around him at once.

It felt something like an I love you.
all right, so you're nonchalantrunpunkrun on December 10th, 2005 01:45 am (UTC)
KarenDreamerLady: Shep Smart Boyfriend by mmmchellekarendreamer on December 10th, 2005 01:49 am (UTC)
Guh...very creative and hot.
Pet: Ronon Petapetslife on December 10th, 2005 01:56 am (UTC)
Oh, hot DAMN.
"She Who Procrastinates": SGA - Rodney - slept like a babylogovo on December 10th, 2005 01:58 am (UTC)
Oh wow.

*whispers* I'm still at the office, but wearing a nice overall happy blush. I'm sure my eyes are all sparkly. Heh. I'm trying so hard not to smile here and give myself away.

Thank you, this was an unexpected kink and so it makes me want to twirl with happiness. So great of you to write this for me, I'm touched :)
z_rayne on December 10th, 2005 02:02 am (UTC)
*points down to her comment*
*falls over laughing at the hive mind choice of icons*
(no subject) - logovo on December 10th, 2005 06:49 am (UTC) (Expand)
z_rayne on December 10th, 2005 02:00 am (UTC)
I-- I am completely incapable of giving coherent feedback on this, because TMI keeps wanting to pop out. Suffice it to say that it was scorching. *g*
tigs: SGA: McShep-Walkin'tigs on December 10th, 2005 02:07 am (UTC)
OMG that was way hotter than I would have imagined it being. But, er, wow. That was. Very nice.
justhuman on December 10th, 2005 02:16 am (UTC)

Add stubble to my kink list from the other post.

Loved all the ficlets earlier today as well :-)
Advection: sweet (& hot)advection on December 10th, 2005 02:27 am (UTC)
"You whine for bandages when you get a paper cut," John said. "Never thought you'd go for something like this" made me smile and A wave of heat broke inside John's head, pulse crashing like surf into his ears, scalp pulling tight is beautiful and the whole thing is totally hot and wonderful, esp the observations at the beginning and end about how they're in private here and free to make sounds they wouldn't otherwise. ::loves::
rache: john rodney blue by newkidfanwickedwords on December 10th, 2005 02:28 am (UTC)
Oh, man. On my way home from work, I was entertaining myself with thoughts about marking and claiming porm, and wow, did this really fit what I was looking for. Thanks!
superheroes failing at oatmeal: dick and tim approve! [by te]some_stars on December 10th, 2005 02:41 am (UTC)
......brain melty all gooey omg yes pls.

Rebecca: Chosen Two - rayne_y_dazenikitangel on December 10th, 2005 02:49 am (UTC)
Very hot! But could I maybe request a cut for it? Just nervous about pulling up my flist in the office :-)
Anna S.eliade on December 10th, 2005 03:40 am (UTC)
Do they peer over your shoulder? This is why you must always keep your back to the wall! That and of course so that you can watch the saloon doors.

I don't know. I've been thinking about this for ten minutes now, which is probably over-obsessing. I'd just rather not cut-tag short comment fics. From what I've seen mentioned on LJ, most people tend to worry more about images, which would be moer likely to catch someone's attention on a monitor. But if a number of people asked for it, that might sway me, I guess. For every person that says something, there's probably another handful of lurkers who feel the same way.

Sorry--I also just second-guess and overthink and neurotically worry about how I say things on LJ so much already that I'm not sure I can take on another right now. If I did, it would probably become something I thought about every time I posted something similar. But I don't mind that you asked. :) And I'm glad you liked it.
(no subject) - nikitangel on December 10th, 2005 04:59 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - fish_23 on December 10th, 2005 09:30 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Moral Whiplash: crack - yay!bkwyrm on December 10th, 2005 03:21 am (UTC)
Oooooo. *sigh*
I have to go download some SGA now...
after me, the deluge: nibbled to death by dinosiamsab on December 10th, 2005 03:44 am (UTC)
Okay, add thigh-biting to my list of kinks. And you know what? I am so prepared to buy the love. I feel the love! I do!
Anna S.: dino-sex-faneliade on December 10th, 2005 03:47 am (UTC)
Oh! Look at your icon. Is Alan/Billy a pairing of yours? I'd use one of the ones I made a while ago except that they're not currently on my active icons list. Damn me!
I am also a big fan of dino-related sex. - iamsab on December 10th, 2005 04:22 am (UTC) (Expand)
Re: I am also a big fan of dino-related sex. - eliade on December 11th, 2005 03:08 am (UTC) (Expand)
Re: I am also a big fan of dino-related sex. - eliade on December 11th, 2005 03:23 am (UTC) (Expand)
nestra on December 10th, 2005 05:07 am (UTC)
Hot damn.
grand_sophygrand_sophy on December 10th, 2005 05:24 am (UTC)
You are absolutely the queen of comment fic. Don't ever stop.