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21 October 2005 @ 05:11 pm
Simon/River/Kaylee: careless, atonement, delirium, for mistakency  
It was the secret he'd never intended to share, but he'd been careless and left the door to his hutch unlocked that night with Kaylee, when the delirium of spores they'd picked up on Red Post was heavy in their veins, and River had crept in--there was no way to tell how long she'd been watching; he noticed her presence when she chose for him to, when she slithered across the floor to kneel by the bedside, shedding her gown along the way, and then she was stroking Kaylee's back with a look of longing on her face. Kaylee had moaned happily, and Simon could deny River nothing. Now he tries to make some kind of atonement, but he doesn't know how or to whom--to River, to Kaylee, to God?--and he knows his shame hangs like a pall over the three of them, turning everything wrong.
laurashapiro on October 22nd, 2005 12:25 am (UTC)
Oh, yes yes yes.
get yourself together, let the light pour in: doctor doctormistakency on October 22nd, 2005 12:27 am (UTC)
I would attempt to say something remotely intelligent, but I'm pretty sure I have died.

Best way to go in the history of ever, though. Thank you.
Herself_nycherself_nyc on October 22nd, 2005 12:33 am (UTC)
AHHHHHHHHHH! You wrote Firefly! Bad wrong Firefly! I love it!
the kid with the bullet soul: FF RS my beautiful sisterexsequar on October 22nd, 2005 01:52 am (UTC)

"Simon could deny River nothing."

OTP, baby. So, so beautiful.
Morgan Dawn: Dune Brother Sister Naughtymorgandawn on October 22nd, 2005 03:08 am (UTC)
Andrea: river [serenity]darling_effect on October 22nd, 2005 03:52 am (UTC)
alittlebritonalittlebriton on October 22nd, 2005 11:53 pm (UTC)
Any time you feel like, y'know, expanding on this, please let me know in advance so I can get some ice out of the freezer. Hot and wrong, just the way I like it.