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07 March 2003 @ 02:24 pm
Tender  
For herself_nyc.



Spike shuddered and drove a stifled cry into the pillow, hips working backwards as Xander's mouth slicked him open. He'd already shredded the sheets in two perfectly hand-sized circles on either side of the bed, and was nearly excavating the mattress--not his fault, though. Couldn't blame him, when the randy bastard was cracking him and eating him like an oyster, fucking him to slippery insanity with his tongue.

As one hard shove went deeper than the others, Spike swallowed a howl and wrenched up handfuls of mattress stuffing and forced his thighs a crucial millimeter further apart to accept Xander's mouth. Stubble rasped across skin, around the stabbing, wet prick of his mouth that was getting more forceful, faster, more frantic, wilder, and when Spike couldn't take it any more, he made a high-pitched, desperate sound, and then--as he was winched up another unbearable notch, his body hot and maddened--at last loosed a snarl, vamped out and sank fangs into the pillow, getting an unexpected mouthful of feathers. He spat them out, head butting for purchase, every part of him down below rolling and trembling as Xander's hand held him where it hurt, jacking him, forcing Spike to move as his grip moved, as if he were just some sodding power saw, cutting where he was pointed.

"God, you're brilliant," he said thickly into the pillow.



 
 
Dammit, Clark's penis is going in *something*.: soft twatthete1 on March 7th, 2003 03:23 pm (UTC)
gyah.

Thank you, ma'am, may I have another?
xanphibian on March 7th, 2003 03:33 pm (UTC)
God, you're brilliant.

My thoughts exactly.
herself_nyc on March 7th, 2003 03:44 pm (UTC)
Oh Christ.

I'm soaking wet now.
(Anonymous) on March 7th, 2003 03:46 pm (UTC)
So, I'll just *imagine* that Spike/Riley brothel scene, then. **sigh**

CC
herself_nyc on March 7th, 2003 03:56 pm (UTC)
Okay, my reaction was insufficient above.

I adore this. I am honored that you wrote it for me. I want more. I just want pages and pages of description of these two being lovers. Please. No plot, no conflict, just--more of this. And chatting. No one does this like you do, you're a genius.
Anna S.eliade on March 9th, 2003 10:42 am (UTC)
I'm sure I'll someday write a(nother) S/X PWP. I'll try to remember to dedicate it to Herself, Patron Saint of Smut. {g}
herself_nyc on March 9th, 2003 10:54 am (UTC)
I would be so so honored if you did.
LadyCat: nbladycat777 on March 7th, 2003 04:34 pm (UTC)
Nyyah. Um. Can we have more of this? No plot, plot is entirely unnecessary. Just the really hot sex.

*whimpers*
Anna S.eliade on March 9th, 2003 10:41 am (UTC)
/licks your icon, runs away
Jimmy Petstore: he can be very persuasivesnoopypez on March 7th, 2003 05:49 pm (UTC)
GUUUH. I second everyone else. Brilliant. So very speechless I am. Guh.
stungunbilly: Happy Banditstungunbilly on March 7th, 2003 06:33 pm (UTC)
Mmmm...
::lights a cigarette::
resonant8 on March 7th, 2003 07:58 pm (UTC)
Oh my god.

You are really on a roll with these short pieces. It's amazing how much ... whatever (hurt, longing, sex, hopelessness) ... you can pack into a couple of paragraphs.
(Anonymous) on March 8th, 2003 06:02 am (UTC)
Stumbled on these by accident - dear god can anyone write sex like you?
Please please more - just more - Spike as I knew he would be with Xander, thankyou.
Anna S.eliade on March 9th, 2003 10:42 am (UTC)
You're welcome! :)
(Anonymous) on March 9th, 2003 07:28 pm (UTC)
Whoa
Holy Shit...that was absolutely incredible.
Your description is unlike anything I've ever read...short and so hot.
More? Please? Pretty please?