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31 December 2004 @ 07:29 pm
yes, dueSouth, I said.  
I've written DS! I hope it's not full of things unconsciously lifted wholesale from episodes I haven't seen in two years, or irredeemable cliches. It's my first charity story, so I thought I'd make a special point of posting the link. Even if I can't fit all stories on this one page, I will probably use the top to post story links.

I think I must take a break and watch The Chronicles of Riddick now.
 
 
 
rubywisp: kellyandjohnny hearts by kitarubywisp on January 1st, 2005 03:32 am (UTC)
I think I must take a break and watch The Chronicles of Riddick now.

My daughter envies the fuck out of you now.

Or would, if she knew.
stungunbillystungunbilly on January 1st, 2005 03:33 am (UTC)
Yay! Also, *nice* icon.
braver: object_swallow on January 1st, 2005 04:01 am (UTC)
::squeals:: ::dizzy:: That was great. And I'll give another $25 for gen dS.
braver_swallow on January 1st, 2005 06:14 am (UTC)
(I just saw your note that you were stopping accepting requests. Consider this one lifted, or swapped with my other if you prefer.)
Anna S.eliade on January 1st, 2005 08:22 am (UTC)
Okay! Which one would you really prefer? :>)
braver: replace_swallow on January 1st, 2005 08:24 am (UTC)
The dS, I think! Thank you!
Anne: DS blue by Wistful_fevertobyfan on January 1st, 2005 04:32 am (UTC)
"I'm sorry, Ray. I didn't want to be late for our dinner, but was unavoidably detained at the Consulate for a meeting on the continentalization of telecommunications and multi-jurisdictional law enforcement in North America."

"I do not have enough aspirin in the house for that sentence."


Bwhahahaha! Oh my. So very Ray.

This was a total delight.
Sarapanisdead on January 1st, 2005 04:33 am (UTC)
I love the dS story--one of my favorite aspects of Fraser is his prim'n'pissiness, and you nailed that. Yay!
You're out of adventures :(: ray with gunclaire on January 1st, 2005 04:40 am (UTC)
Beautiful story. Just fabulous. I heart your Ray and Fraser.
lovessong: woman en largelovessong on January 1st, 2005 05:20 am (UTC)
Eeep! *loves*

lynnmonsterlynnmonster on January 1st, 2005 08:00 am (UTC)
Ohmigod I love you. That is all.
Pouncer: Hopeful Fraserthepouncer on January 1st, 2005 08:58 am (UTC)
So very Ray. I wasn't quite sure how the drive back from Ray's baseball glory related to the rest, unless it was supposed to be that he started seeing Fraser as sexy during the drive? Aside from that, though, both sections were gorgeously in character, and made me want to dig out my DVDs and watch the two of them flirt with each other.
Anna S.eliade on January 1st, 2005 05:11 pm (UTC)
So very Ray. I wasn't quite sure how the drive back from Ray's baseball glory related to the rest

It didn't. At all. *g* Yes, well. I felt fortunate to get 2500 semi-coherent words though. *embarrassed cough*

Aside from that, though, both sections were gorgeously in character

Thank you so much! :>D
Kat Allisonkatallison on January 1st, 2005 12:39 pm (UTC)
I adore you. (I mean, I've always adored you, but this just deepened the lustre and burnished the radiance of my veneration.)

And hey, you know what they say, that thing about how the way you spend New Years sets the tone for how you'll spend the rest of the year? ::making wild gestures of encouragement that are Kowalski-like in their vehemence and enthusiasm:: (OK, so you posted it before midnight your time, but still and all, it was New Years *somewhere* in the world, right?)
laurashapiro on January 1st, 2005 06:03 pm (UTC)
It's beautiful, charming, and hilarious. I'm only slightly kicking myself for not having requested DS -- it didn't occur to me it was an option. And you do it so well!
the opposite of batmanpearl_o on January 1st, 2005 06:55 pm (UTC)
Oh, lovely -- I adore this madly.
squeeze me, stomp me,  make me winemoosesal on January 1st, 2005 08:10 pm (UTC)
Delightful story. I just loved it.

liberating the occasional crackwhore from her pimp.... even streetwalkers have families. Ah yes. That's our Fraser. Saving everyone.

"Once during the interrogation of a suspect, when you were wearing a particularly fetching pair of blue jeans--no, correction--I'd have to say at least twice. And, oh, once during a very long and unremarkable autopsy, when my thoughts wandered--"

An autopsy? Brilliant. :)

Nice amount of snark and banter. Loved the driving scene at the beginning. Overall, great job.
\o/: dS Adoretrue_enough on January 1st, 2005 08:30 pm (UTC)
This reminds me of your wonderful No Man is Born an Angler where the entire courtship took place in what they said - or didn't say. Smart, funny and sweet - all my favorite things. I can only hope that you'll write more.
Erin: slashytingler on January 3rd, 2005 08:17 am (UTC)
Truly, thy dS fic rocketh, even if it endeth a trifle too sooneth. Thou hast the Ray voice locketh'd and loadeth'd!
Cesperanza: Deathcesperanza on January 10th, 2005 07:09 am (UTC)
Crawling out of my tomb to play catch-up!
Fraser grew still and kept staring ahead. "Yes." A long pause. "I've thought about having sex with you, Ray." Another pause. "In bed at night, when I'm alone. On the occasional stake-out, or over dinner, during long our talks. In car rides, of course." He appeared to be warming up to confession, or getting caught up in the importance of making an accurate list. He tilted his head. "Once during the interrogation of a suspect, when you were wearing a particularly fetching pair of blue jeans--no, correction--I'd have to say at least twice. And, oh, once during a very long and unremarkable autopsy, when my thoughts wandered--"

Okay, so at--He appeared to be warming up to confession, or getting caught up in the importance of making an accurate list--I had to stop and laugh for half an hour. Little gems in here, almost tossed away. Delicious!

(You do know that it's dumb to post a story in a new fandom buried in your livejournal without even a title on New Years' Eve without even posting to the Livejournals where fans of that fandom live? You're cute, baby, and talented as fuck, but kinda dumb. *G*)

Still, I love you anyway!
inappropriately bibliophilicraucousraven on January 11th, 2005 05:27 am (UTC)
"I do not have enough aspirin in the house for that sentence."


Ah, Ray Kowalski: reality for the rest of us. How I do adore him. Your utterly sure grasp of how to write a voice - a real, live, individual voice distinct from anyone else's on this greeny-browny earth - never fails to astonish me.