January 22nd, 2003

elijah

Edit mania.

In typical fashion, I've been editing the noir after posting. Not anything major, just lost of little edits--but cumulatively they should add up to a smoother read, with some leaner, clearer sentences. I'm about halfway done so far, with the edits so far being live online. The rest will get done tonight, probably by 11:30 at the latest, PST.