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09 December 2005 @ 05:39 pm
extra comment fic: Uncommon  
As a thank-you for sending me "Hive," some scribbling for logovo: some unusual kink for either John or Rodney



"No, please--harder." Rodney's voice was husky, like it never got except when they were alone in bed and he didn't need to assert his authority over anyone or point out exactly why they were heartbreaking examples of declining educational standards or yelp his outrage at the slings and arrows of a universe that was out to get him.

John rested his chin on Rodney's hip to study him, then rubbed his stubbled cheek across the skin and got a little outcry in response, but Rodney's eyes didn't open. His face was flushed pink and his body exuded heat. The movements of his head against the pillow had smudged his hair askew.

"You sure?"

In what was probably an answer, Rodney dug the fingers of his left hand into the sheets as if to anchor himself and shifted. John could hear his breathing quicken and realized that just the thought of harder was jacking Rodney's urgency higher.

"You whine for bandages when you get a paper cut," John said. "Never thought you'd go for something like this."

Rodney shook his head from side to side on the pillow, tense like a cocked trigger, not patient or impatient, just suspended until John started again. John raked his jaw down Rodney's thigh and back up, wondering how long he could draw it out until Rodney broke and begged. He didn't draw it out--but he only started again because he wanted to, because he couldn't wait. He bit the base of Rodney's dick and Rodney cried out, convulsing on the bed as if John had just touched him with a live wire. A wave of heat broke inside John's head, pulse crashing like surf into his ears, scalp pulling tight. He bit up along the shaft, harder this time, taking Rodney at his word. Delicate skin turned red, marked by his teeth.

"Oh god, please," Rodney cried, "oh god, please--" His words bled together into a chant and the closer John got to the swollen head of his cock, the more desperate he sounded. When John sank his teeth there, Rodney sobbed and arched and came. The wetness hit John's tongue and slid back out, slicking Rodney's skin, and John sucked and got another hit, and then a few more, each dryer but jerking in his mouth with the same intensity. The contractions tapered off but he kept thrusting his tongue against the head with hard strokes until Rodney groaned and weakly batted him away.

John drew off and ground his hips against the bed a few times, shuddering and ready to stay in a holding pattern for a few more minutes, but the friction was so good that his hips sped up. He worked his dick frantically over the rucked sheets until he came, muscles clenching with pleasure, throat locking by instinct to cage any sounds that could betray him.

But he wasn't being tortured, he didn't have to hold in information.

"Oh fuck," he said, crawling up to collapse against Rodney, whose arms wrapped around him at once.

It felt something like an I love you.
 
 
 
all right, so you're nonchalantrunpunkrun on December 10th, 2005 01:45 am (UTC)
*pant*
KarenDreamerLady: Shep Smart Boyfriend by mmmchellekarendreamer on December 10th, 2005 01:49 am (UTC)
Guh...very creative and hot.
Pet: Ronon Petapetslife on December 10th, 2005 01:56 am (UTC)
Oh, hot DAMN.
"She Who Procrastinates": SGA - Rodney - slept like a babylogovo on December 10th, 2005 01:58 am (UTC)
Oh wow.

*whispers* I'm still at the office, but wearing a nice overall happy blush. I'm sure my eyes are all sparkly. Heh. I'm trying so hard not to smile here and give myself away.

Thank you, this was an unexpected kink and so it makes me want to twirl with happiness. So great of you to write this for me, I'm touched :)
Zoë Rayne: rodney fetish closez_rayne on December 10th, 2005 02:02 am (UTC)
*points down to her comment*
*falls over laughing at the hive mind choice of icons*
"She Who Procrastinates": SGA - Rodney - slept like a babylogovo on December 10th, 2005 06:49 am (UTC)
it is rather ... eerie... ;)
Zoë Rayne: rodney comicbookz_rayne on December 10th, 2005 02:00 am (UTC)
I-- I am completely incapable of giving coherent feedback on this, because TMI keeps wanting to pop out. Suffice it to say that it was scorching. *g*
tigs: SGA: McShep-Walkin'tigs on December 10th, 2005 02:07 am (UTC)
OMG that was way hotter than I would have imagined it being. But, er, wow. That was. Very nice.
JustHuman: flamingojusthuman on December 10th, 2005 02:16 am (UTC)
Yum!

Add stubble to my kink list from the other post.

Loved all the ficlets earlier today as well :-)
Advection: sweet (& hot)advection on December 10th, 2005 02:27 am (UTC)
"You whine for bandages when you get a paper cut," John said. "Never thought you'd go for something like this" made me smile and A wave of heat broke inside John's head, pulse crashing like surf into his ears, scalp pulling tight is beautiful and the whole thing is totally hot and wonderful, esp the observations at the beginning and end about how they're in private here and free to make sounds they wouldn't otherwise. ::loves::
rache: john rodney blue by newkidfanwickedwords on December 10th, 2005 02:28 am (UTC)
Oh, man. On my way home from work, I was entertaining myself with thoughts about marking and claiming porm, and wow, did this really fit what I was looking for. Thanks!
superheroes failing at oatmeal: dick and tim approve! [by te]some_stars on December 10th, 2005 02:41 am (UTC)
......brain melty all gooey omg yes pls.

*FLAILY HANDS FOREVER*
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Rebecca: Chosen Two - rayne_y_dazenikitangel on December 10th, 2005 02:49 am (UTC)
Very hot! But could I maybe request a cut for it? Just nervous about pulling up my flist in the office :-)
Anna S.eliade on December 10th, 2005 03:40 am (UTC)
Do they peer over your shoulder? This is why you must always keep your back to the wall! That and of course so that you can watch the saloon doors.

I don't know. I've been thinking about this for ten minutes now, which is probably over-obsessing. I'd just rather not cut-tag short comment fics. From what I've seen mentioned on LJ, most people tend to worry more about images, which would be moer likely to catch someone's attention on a monitor. But if a number of people asked for it, that might sway me, I guess. For every person that says something, there's probably another handful of lurkers who feel the same way.

Sorry--I also just second-guess and overthink and neurotically worry about how I say things on LJ so much already that I'm not sure I can take on another right now. If I did, it would probably become something I thought about every time I posted something similar. But I don't mind that you asked. :) And I'm glad you liked it.
Rebeccanikitangel on December 10th, 2005 04:59 am (UTC)
Oh, I share an office and a computer with five other people (and the random students who wander in). Never know who's paying attention!

Totally your prerogative on your journal, of course. I can see why you wouldn't want to cut it. I have to play it safe, though, so I'll probably end up taking you off my flist. Absolutely nothing personal and I hope you keep writing!
fish_23 on December 10th, 2005 09:30 pm (UTC)
I think it's also the problem of bigger companies with IT departments that can pull up where people have been on websites with 'inappropriate material'.

But then again that feeds into the fact that I'm surfing the net at work and smoking crack at my desk, but if they wanted a better employee they should have given me a car. And a yaught. And the go ahead to smoke crack and read porn on the net. Bastards!

psst. There are always work filters so no worries.
Moral Whiplash: crack - yay!bkwyrm on December 10th, 2005 03:21 am (UTC)
Oooooo. *sigh*
I have to go download some SGA now...
after me, the deluge: nibbled to death by dinosiamsab on December 10th, 2005 03:44 am (UTC)
Okay, add thigh-biting to my list of kinks. And you know what? I am so prepared to buy the love. I feel the love! I do!
Anna S.: dino-sex-faneliade on December 10th, 2005 03:47 am (UTC)
Oh! Look at your icon. Is Alan/Billy a pairing of yours? I'd use one of the ones I made a while ago except that they're not currently on my active icons list. Damn me!
after me, the deluge: nibbled to death by dinosiamsab on December 10th, 2005 04:22 am (UTC)
I am also a big fan of dino-related sex.
This icon's actually from the one and only classic JPI, but, BUT. JP III is quite possibly the slashiest movie ever. Lemme find... my JP3 slash roundup from Feb. 2004.

Did you write me any Alan/Billy? I must find this, if so. Share with me all the dinolovin' you might have. Also any relevant Alan/Billy icons?
Anna S.: jack-bristow-darkeliade on December 11th, 2005 03:08 am (UTC)
Re: I am also a big fan of dino-related sex.
I am also a big fan of dino-related sex.

I hear so many people say that, which is why I'm so glad that I've been able to get the word out in my new book, The Saurus Is Not Just for Writers, that these feelings are not wrong.

This icon's actually from the one and only classic JPI,</i>

D'oh! Of course it is. I knew that>

but, BUT. JP III is quite possibly the slashiest movie ever.

YES!

Lemme find... my JP3 slash roundup from Feb. 2004.

Ah. We've read all the same stories in this tiny, tiny fandom. *g* Well, a few of them I might not have seen--I'll click and see.

Did you write me any Alan/Billy? I must find this, if so.

Sadly, no. I've thought about it. Maybe one day. But I'd have to study up on dinosaurs. Research deters me. I'm lazy. I only start researching once I've already been sucked into a fandom down the slippery slope of PWPs, I think.

Share with me all the dinolovin' you might have.

I did do some non-writing writing with Billy when the icon cracked pairing meme swept LJ earlier this year. Best. Meme. Ever. Here's what I didn't write.

Also any relevant Alan/Billy icons?

Yes. :) I will find and post them for you.

Also, have you read fabularasa's story, Creepy? It's great. :)
Anna S.: dino-boneseliade on December 11th, 2005 03:23 am (UTC)
Re: I am also a big fan of dino-related sex.
nestra on December 10th, 2005 05:07 am (UTC)
Hot damn.
grand_sophygrand_sophy on December 10th, 2005 05:24 am (UTC)
You are absolutely the queen of comment fic. Don't ever stop.
namastenancynamastenancy on December 10th, 2005 06:44 am (UTC)
You take the Ms. Universe/Solar System Title for Best Comment Fic ever. This one is just.....gughhhh...
Shonaille: shepkalikahuntress on December 10th, 2005 07:39 am (UTC)
**blinks** whoa, that was just, i don't know who im more intensely jealous of, Rodney or John bcse this is just, beyond fucking hot:)
J Calanthe: zoemanlyfashionjcalanthe on December 10th, 2005 11:50 am (UTC)
*fans self* Damn, that was hot! Nice choice of unusual kink.
chi-zu: vm xmas boxerschi_zu on December 10th, 2005 03:22 pm (UTC)
I don't watch SGA, but I have been enjoying your short snippets very much.

Also, your dinosaur icons make me giggle! I lurve them!
tabaquitabaqui on December 10th, 2005 06:30 pm (UTC)
Whahahaha.
Live wire for sure.
Damn.
Tonia Barone: Have you looked in a mirror?toniabarone on December 10th, 2005 07:07 pm (UTC)
*shivers* Damn hot. Freck. Thank you so much for this. Damn.
Edmund Crankypants: I want sex by sardiusanitac588 on December 10th, 2005 07:33 pm (UTC)
*whistles*
Now this was hot, very hot.
darkhavensdarkhavens on December 10th, 2005 08:29 pm (UTC)
Dayum! *adds a new twist to my bitey kink*

Delicious!
seekergeekseekergeek on December 10th, 2005 11:42 pm (UTC)
Excuse me. Must go wipe drool off keyboard now.
V.aurora_84 on December 11th, 2005 12:46 am (UTC)
*brain melts*

G U H!
crownglass39crownglass39 on December 11th, 2005 03:16 am (UTC)
Oh. My. God.

Love you!
gil: SGA: the devil in megilkurtis on December 11th, 2005 05:59 am (UTC)
Okay, wow. That was hot.
Jain: jain rononjain on December 11th, 2005 09:08 am (UTC)
This...is really freaking hot. Just, wow.
kitkat3979kitkat3979 on December 11th, 2005 10:55 am (UTC)
Mmm, very hot!
mahoymahoy on December 11th, 2005 06:14 pm (UTC)
Well. Shit. *melts*
slashpuppyslashpuppy on January 1st, 2007 01:42 pm (UTC)
Unbelievably hot fic. Love the way that Rodney reacted not only to the biting but also John's stubble. Hawt stuff! ;-)