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26 November 2005 @ 06:14 pm
weapons, trees, chocolate, and bondage  
I'm seriously a bit embarrassed to be posting something this unexceptional in a fandom that has so many brilliant stars and stories, but I've been trying to write, like a mime leaning into a strong wind, so it's good for me to get even a porny vignette done. It's the fan-fiction equivalent of kindergarten refrigerator art but, yay. For iamsab, helenish, thegrrrl2002, seperis (who asked for something here), and a bunch of other people I'm thinking of.

lame title: weapons, trees, chocolate, and bondage
stargate atlantis, john/rodney, nc-17, 1000+ words


The trees around their guest house flickered in the evening breeze. Rodney could hear them through the open windows. Peaceful, if you liked that sort of thing. The soft noise just made his mind itch the way the rough sheets made his skin itch. He wanted a strong lamp, a thermos of coffee, a few chocolate-toffee Powerbars, and his laptop. But he had weak and shivering candles, no coffee, no bars, and he had to conserve battery power for more important things than entertaining himself until dawn, even when entertaining himself meant trying to find a new way to increase energy output from Atlantis's newly reactivated photovoltaic skin.

"You're up," Sheppard said, making Rodney twist and yelp. He unleaned himself from the doorway and slouched in, hands in baggy pockets, as Rodney tried to restart his heart. "I can't sleep either."

"I could sleep. I choose not to."

"Because you're thinking."

"Yes. Always. Important thoughts that could change the destinies of millions and bring about a new age of scientific enlightenment."

"You can't sleep."

"No," Rodney admitted, giving in easily. "Pernicious insomnia."

John turned away from the nearest window to study him. "You don't seem to be dying just yet."

"It'll happen. Give it time. Assuming the Wraith don't get us first."

"So many faces of death--it must be a shame having only one life to lose."

"Yes, here we go." Rodney sighed and lay back. "Mock away."

"Want me to tie you up?"

"God, I thought you'd never ask." Rodney sat back up and shucked his shirt and pants while John watched, amused on the surface, something darker in his eyes. "You brought rope?"

John drew matching coils of leather from his pockets and loosened his grip so that they dangled. Rodney drew in a breath sharp enough to leave his mouth dry, then arranged himself rigidly on the bed and stretched his arms above him.

"Nice of the Suarrans to provide railed headboards," John observed, coming over to kneel on the mattress.

"They're a civilized people."

"Who want to trade textiles for weapons." Face as bland as his tone, John did tricky things with knots around Rodney's right wrist.

"Yes, about those textiles. I'm not sure we're breaking even in this deal." He moved with restless, critical twitches against the sheets. "Did I mention they're scratchy?"

"Many, many times." John finished tying his other wrist and gave it a tug to test it. "Mmm." His eyelids lowered and his lips upturned, satisfied. "You're so much more attractive when you're restrained. I wonder why that is."

"Ha." But Rodney couldn't muster the vigor for a real rebuttal. Muscles locked tight for days had already started to loosen, and he could feel his mouth softening, words slipping away; he felt like a pat of butter melting over a pancake.

"Such a pretty man."

"Oh, please," Rodney muttered around a flicker of a smile. His eyes were closed and he wasn't inclined to open them to see what John's expression might be. Besides. He was supposed to be trusting John right now.

"I'm going to do indecent things to you." John sounded certain of this, then said in a more pouty tone, "Hey. You're not going to fall asleep on me, are you?"

"I'd say that depends entirely on your level of skill and effort."

"You ever think about going for the suave compliment instead of the cheap shot? Although," he said, getting off the bed to stand lankily at its side, "when it costs you great sex, I'd call that a damn expensive shot."

Rodney's eyes flew open in dismay and he lifted his head from the pillow. "That *wasn't* a cheap shot! Just the truth. I mean, I'm tired. Really, *really* tired." He ogled John hungrily despite this.

"Hmm." After considering him for a moment, John sat to take off his boots, relieving Rodney greatly. "That truth thing's going to get you in trouble someday. Oh, wait. It already has."

"Now *that's* a cheap shot." But John was taking his shirt and pants and boxers off, and then he was laid bare, dog-tags gleaming against his chest in the candlelight, his lean thighs and calves a locker-room sight that in a better reality would have turned a hundred servicemen insanely gay.

He came back to bed with a single-use twist-tube of lube in his hand, which made Rodney's cock stiffen jerkily. He resettled his head, eyes shutting again, and drew his legs up and apart as far as they'd go, which was further than they'd gone a year ago. PT had some benefits, even if it was a sweaty misery, the need for which would have been easily alleviated if they'd only thought to bring a few Jeeps through the gate.

"You make me a little crazy," John said with an undercurrent of *how the hell do you do that?* that Rodney had no trouble deciphering. A sense of his own power surged through him, leaving him fully charged and vibrating. "Rodney. You with me?" John's voice had gone low and throaty and deliberate, sticking on his words, peanut butter over a bed of gravel.

"Peanut butter," Rodney said breathlessly, dreamily. He meant it as a yes.

"Excuse me?"

"Oh, please keep doing that," Rodney pleaded, surfacing immediately when John's hands stopped moving. They started up again more slowly.

"You always think of food during sex, don't you?"

"Not always. Sometimes I think of the hierarchy problem." Damn his honesty, he thought with regret when John's hands stopped again. If he hadn't heard the snick of the lube being opened, he might have wept in frustration. Or at least bitched a lot.

John's dick slid in easily, right up to the hilt, and Rodney's mouth froze midthought. He tried to grab on, realized his wrists were tied, and nearly climaxed. "Oh oh god," he whispered, and twisted and worked his hips as if trying to open a recorked bottle. John groaned, a high-pitched gratified sound, and bucked against him urgently, balls flush to Rodney's ass. Rodney didn't last long, the burn in his ass matching the burn in his wrists too perfectly, and gave a violently stifled cry as he came. John sped up and finished in him a minute later.

"Crazy," he muttered, falling out of Rodney and off to one side.

But Rodney was already asleep enough not to really hear. He dreamed about a world covered in trees that hugged back when you held them. It was the best dream ever.
 
 
after me, the deluge: no you're cool i'm fine iamsab on November 27th, 2005 02:44 am (UTC)
I regret that I have but one life to give for my fandom!
he was laid bare, dog-tags gleaming against his chest in the candlelight, his lean thighs and calves a locker-room sight that in a better reality would have turned a hundred servicemen insanely gay.

::gayservicemensquee!::

Also, oh, the peanut butter yes. Absolutely, I can HEAR the peanut butter, and it IS enough to make a grown man forget how to use his words.

You have given us a boon this day! With trees that hugged back and Rodney, seriously, BEING hotter when he's restrained -- I think because we are so used to watching him being competent and flailing, and when he can't do that he's all laid bare and nothing left but his body and his flesh and his eyes and his BRAINS.

Yeah, it's all good, baby.
kormantic: see? toldja. kormantic on November 27th, 2005 02:46 am (UTC)
the sound you hear is my head exploding
Muscles locked tight for days had already started to loosen, and he could feel his mouth softening, words slipping away; he felt like a pat of butter melting over a pancake.

Yeah. Well. He's not the only one. Holy hell, baby-- I thought I'd faint!

But John was taking his shirt and pants and boxers off, and then he was laid bare, dog-tags gleaming against his chest in the candlelight, his lean thighs and calves a locker-room sight that in a better reality would have turned a hundred servicemen insanely gay.

Heh. This is that better reality. John finds mash notes under his pillow every night! And when he does that hip thing, they just wait for him in the shower.

John's voice had gone low and throaty and deliberate, sticking on his words, peanut butter over a bed of gravel.

Fuck me.

And when Rodney says, "peanut butter" I laughed even as I about swooned from the heat.

Remember the part where fandom waits on your next snippet with bated breath? The slash nation is happily exhaling that post-coital puff of cigarette even now! ::yeeeeees with glee before choking on a Kool- hey, wait a minute, I don't smoke!::

::sighs your name::
kormantic: jungle cat kormantic on November 27th, 2005 02:52 am (UTC)
about the trees who hugged back...
Atlantis Rodney = post-Lady Amalthea Shmendrick, see, because he's grown into his true powers and stuff, and I think I should maybe go to bed now, because I'm not talking any sense... hmm, trees!
Re: about the trees who hugged back... - mecurtin on November 27th, 2005 08:53 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Advection: undone advection on November 27th, 2005 02:50 am (UTC)
I somehow managed to glaze over the title, probably because all I processed was your username and the concept 'new fic' before I went omg and clicked in blind haste on the cut tag, so "Want me to tie you up?" was a killer surprise. Perfect.

I love the language and the images. The sound of the trees, the itchy sheets and restless, critical twitches, the description of Rodney melting, the amazing description of John's voice.

This is so hot -- the sentence He tried to grab on, realized his wrists were tied, and nearly climaxed just undid me -- but so sad underneath. I read it about three times, trying to decide who's keeping who at arm's length with the verbal stuff, and I couldn't. Maybe it's both of them. Rodney's dream! I want him to have his hug. But even though John rolled over and away, Rodney was already falling asleep. So ::wails:: I don't know.

Anyway, it's lovely. I'm so glad you wrote and posted. :-)

(And since I just saw the previous comment ... yeah, what kormantic said. *g*)
the upper echelons of mediocrity: John & Rodney the_star_fish on November 27th, 2005 02:51 am (UTC)
Well, hey! Nothing at all like a kindergarten drawing!

Seriously, I likes it muchly. Especially the part about Rodney melting like a pat of butter. Mmm, pancakes. *g*

Nice job!
anashi on November 27th, 2005 03:00 am (UTC)
Haha, I loved it. *eats a piece of chocolate in your honor*
torn between not okay and maybe kind of cute: defies physics kalpurna on November 27th, 2005 03:26 am (UTC)
"Peanut butter," Rodney said breathlessly, dreamily. He meant it as a yes.

Oh, such a perfect example of what I love most in your writing; these clever little twisty lines. You put six and eight together and get thirty-three. Love love love.

He dreamed about a world covered in trees that hugged back when you held them. It was the best dream ever.

And then omgwtf the greatest ending evar. I do not know what goes on in your brain but I like it.
Resonant: Genius resonant8 on November 27th, 2005 03:31 am (UTC)
Mmmmmm. You've got nothing to apologize for. I love the way they're their own prickly complicated irrelevent selves. Very happy now.
rache wickedwords on November 27th, 2005 03:37 am (UTC)
Bondage and Trees! You totally rock.
tabaqui tabaqui on November 27th, 2005 03:38 am (UTC)
Duuuuuuude.

Love. It.
The weird little seques, the sudden blurting of the truth. The hawt. The trees that hug back and the dog-tags....

Fuck yeah.
:)
Moral Whiplash bkwyrm on November 27th, 2005 03:40 am (UTC)
Whew. Hot, hot, hot.
Pouncer: Sheppard/Gun OTP thepouncer on November 27th, 2005 04:08 am (UTC)
I say (and I have no ulterior motive whatsoever. No. Really. Really!) that there needs to be more of your refrigerator art, especially if it involves Sheppard tying Rodney up and doing obscene things to him. *revels*
Alizarin_NYC: crichton's road to nowhere alizarin_nyc on November 27th, 2005 04:23 am (UTC)
I'd read your friggin' grocery list, let's face it. But you + McShep makes me feel like the world has been made right again. JOY! *sings* You are unique, this is lovely.
thegrrrl: Rodney galaxy thegrrrl2002 on November 27th, 2005 04:46 am (UTC)
Yay!! You wrote! And they're delicous together. So snarky. And the last lines, so hurty. It's beautiful!

I think Rodney would look very pretty restrained. And naked. We already got restrained a few times, like in "Condemned", so they just have to work on the naked part for us.

In the meanwhile, I'll just reread this a few more times. *g*

namastenancy namastenancy on November 27th, 2005 05:06 am (UTC)
Post-coital!


WORD!

"Remember the part where fandom waits on your next snippet with bated breath? The slash nation is happily exhaling that post-coital puff of cigarette even now! ::yeeeeees with glee before choking on a Kool- hey, wait a minute, I don't smoke!::"
minnow minnow1212 on November 27th, 2005 05:15 am (UTC)
>"Peanut butter," Rodney said breathlessly, dreamily. He meant it as a yes<

This line makes me so happy, I can't even tell you.
Mayhem Parva raincitygirl on November 27th, 2005 06:32 am (UTC)
Oh my. *fans self*
that'll give you bees: SGA - Rodney is tired zoetrope on November 27th, 2005 08:42 am (UTC)
Yay! Finally the day has come that you're writing SGA. This was wonderful, and really not the sort of thing I should be reading on a public computer but screw that *g*

He tried to grab on, realized his wrists were tied, and nearly climaxed. "Oh oh god," he whispered

Yeah, that's the stuff :)
Kitestringer: Rodney is totally crushing kitestringer on November 27th, 2005 11:00 am (UTC)
"You make me a little crazy," John said with an undercurrent of *how the hell do you do that?* that Rodney had no trouble deciphering. A sense of his own power surged through him, leaving him fully charged and vibrating. "Rodney. You with me?" John's voice had gone low and throaty and deliberate, sticking on his words, peanut butter over a bed of gravel.

"Peanut butter," Rodney said breathlessly, dreamily. He meant it as a yes.


Hee! I'd say that's my favorite part, except then I'd be unfairly leaving out all my other favorite parts. I'll just say I adore the entire thing and leave it at that. *g*
d dvslj on November 27th, 2005 04:17 pm (UTC)
What made me boggle was that despite insanely loving the rest, the part that got me and made me weirdly melty was this:

But Rodney was already asleep enough not to really hear. He dreamed about a world covered in trees that hugged back when you held them. It was the best dream ever.

Awwwwwe, Rodney!! I loved that part so much ;-)
Explicit Adult Content? You're soaking in it!: guh ded: Your words make my brain go all yin_again on November 27th, 2005 04:24 pm (UTC)
"You're so much more attractive when you're restrained. I wonder why that is."

Pls. see icon.

I love your stories; they make me obnoxiously happy.
Lucy: johnsga cereta on November 27th, 2005 06:02 pm (UTC)
Oh, very nice!
The Spike spike21 on November 27th, 2005 06:10 pm (UTC)
this was lovely!! I love the way the side-slipping rhythm of the banter/hesitation amps the sexual tension up. The hottest thing for me was where Rodney re-realizes his wrists are tied and nearly comes. New kink! New kink!

(and no I hadn't realized you'd written, I was delibarately avoiding LJ in case anyone else posted Rodney/Jace and crushed my tender flower of self-confidence.)
Ridiculously Fanatic: 13 McShep by skater_g8r nel_ani on November 27th, 2005 07:07 pm (UTC)
There's nothing unexceptional about this. You wrote bondage, which really isn't my cup of tea, and I *loved* it. Especially:

"You make me a little crazy," John said with an undercurrent of *how the hell do you do that?* that Rodney had no trouble deciphering. A sense of his own power surged through him, leaving him fully charged and vibrating. "Rodney. You with me?" John's voice had gone low and throaty and deliberate, sticking on his words, peanut butter over a bed of gravel.

"Peanut butter," Rodney said breathlessly, dreamily.
danger beckett flanigan the third: slash fan_this on November 27th, 2005 07:13 pm (UTC)
Wow.

You win at life. And poker. And anything else you'd like to win at because DAMN.

"Peanut butter," Rodney said breathlessly, dreamily. He meant it as a yes.

HAH! I've so done that too...
Ardent: Hot Zone ardent_muses on November 27th, 2005 09:26 pm (UTC)
Mmmm. I enjoyed this so much. You have some fabulous images -- the pat of butter, the peanut butter on gravel and the word-pic of John naked. Delicous!