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17 March 2005 @ 08:59 am
it's indicative of my fitfulness...  
Yesterday I wrote a single sentence--wow--and kept revisiting it and staring at it throughout the day whenever I wanted a break. But it never grew into more than itself.

Spike lay asleep on the bed, ivory limbs a scrawl of Kanji against the dark-blue sheets.

It was going to be from Riley's POV.

Last night I missed Alias. I went to bed at quarter to eight. I slept over eleven hours. My body knows what it wants, I guess. It doesn't particularly want the yogurt I'm currently spooning into it, but tough luck. If it's good, I may give it a piece of chocolate later.
 
 
 
Trepkostrepkos on March 17th, 2005 05:08 pm (UTC)
"Spike lay asleep on the bed, ivory limbs a scrawl of Kanji against the dark-blue sheets.
It was going to be from Riley's POV."

Give us more!

"If it's good, I may give it a piece of chocolate later"

Disconnected much?
squeeze me, stomp me,  make me winemoosesal on March 17th, 2005 05:47 pm (UTC)
I feel your pain. I spent a month with a story that consisted of only one line: Ray Kowalksi was restless. At least your sentence is longer. :) May it eventually grow into a fic.
Ms. Stinkycarrielee on March 17th, 2005 06:19 pm (UTC)
Anything, anything to get you to write more Spike/Riley. I mean it. Anything.

When I'm feeling like I need a little pick-me-up I re-read your Spriley (I feel dirty even typing that) doodle from way back. I keep it in my memories and pet it often. It always makes me happy.
Laura Stone: Animerotic Giraffes are HAWTstoney321 on March 17th, 2005 06:28 pm (UTC)
*PINCH!*

Happy St. Pat's Day!

Sleep = good
chocolate = good
yogurt = good (unless you want chocolate, then yogurt = bad)

You should definitely have the chocolate.
flaming museflaming_muse on March 17th, 2005 07:50 pm (UTC)
But what a lovely sentence - and visual - it is!
Magarettt: buffy wish by glossingmagarettt on March 17th, 2005 09:21 pm (UTC)
It could be haiku-ified.
Anna S.: trees_whiteskyeliade on March 17th, 2005 09:23 pm (UTC)
Haikuified! What a great word. I want to adopt it and parade it everywhere. E.g., "My day desperately needs to be haikuified to make it meaningful..."
Essene: chocolate cock by smallwhitedragonessene on March 18th, 2005 01:45 am (UTC)
*crys over the excellence of a sentence*

To quote Party Monster:

It's really a shame you can't publish a sentence. I'm convinced it would be a best seller.